One of your colleagues Recently got a new job at another Company. Write a letter to him and say you feel about him What you enjoy the most while working together Ask what is future plans are
Dear Jodh,
How are you doing? I can hardly express my
feeling
about your Fix the agreement mistake
feelings
a
new job that you got recently. well, I would congrats Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
on
yours
dream job.
I know Correct pronoun usage
your
its
a big loss for our Replace the word
it's
it is
comapany beacuse
you are leaving . Despite Correct your spelling
company because
this
, your success is Linking Words
also
Linking Words
matter
for Correct subject-verb agreement
matters
everyones
and all of the staff members of Correct your spelling
everyone
production
department very thrilled . Correct article usage
the production
Moreover
, I would miss Linking Words
our
Correct pronoun usage
apply
team
work that we performed Correct your spelling
the
to gether
to Correct your spelling
together
acheieve
the target Correct your spelling
achieve
about
sales .
There are Change preposition
of
alot
of things which we enjoyed and some are still unopened. Correct your spelling
a lot
Linking Words
However
I Add a comma
However,
would
miss your company all the Wrong verb form
will
times
and never Fix the agreement mistake
time
forgot
your Wrong verb form
forget
hardwork
. The most Correct your spelling
hard work
unforgoton
moment Correct your spelling
unforgotten
when
we got the best team award at a national level.
let me know your plans as well like are you Add a missing verb
was when
planing
to work on weekends or not. if not, we will make a day to recall ourCorrect your spelling
planning
memeories
.
once again congratulations!
yours freind,
roopCorrect your spelling
memories
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grammar
Pay attention to spelling and grammar: some words are misspelled ('comapany' should be 'company', 'unforgoton' should be 'unforgotten').
tone
Use formal language and avoid colloquial phrases to maintain a professional tone.
coherence
Structure the letter with clear, distinct paragraphs for each idea to improve readability.
task achievement
The letter addresses all parts of the task including expressing feelings, saying what you enjoyed the most, and asking about future plans.
coherence
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriate for the context.
tone
The letter conveys genuine emotion and well-wishes, contributing to a warm tone.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,