The chart below shows information about Heart Attacks by Age and Gender in USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. • You should write at least 150 words. • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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heart

attacks

among

women

and

men

belonging to the different

age

groups in the USA.

Overall

,

heart

attacks

are more common among

men

rather than

women

.

Additionally

,

fewest

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amout

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amount

of females and males face

this

type of

heart

disease in the 29-44

age

groups,

while

both

women

and

men

have more trouble with their hearts in the

age

of 65+. The minimum of

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chart is observed in the

age

group of 29-44 in both genders,

however

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women

have

heart

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more heart

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attacks

less

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than

men

, particularly 3

thousand

and 123

thousand

respectively.

Moreover

,

heart

attacks

become more widespread among dwellers of the USA as they get older.

This

trend can be seen in the

age

groups of 45-64 and 65+.

Women

have more

heart

attacks

in 45-64, exactly 136

thousand

, which means that their quantity increased by 133

thousand

. The upward trend is observed among

men

too, 424

thousand

men

face

heart

attacks

when they are between 45

-

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and 64

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. It

also

should be mentioned that the maximum of

this

chart is 440

thousand

men

aged 65 and higher suffering from

heart

attacks

,

furthermore

, the least difference between amount of people from both genders is seen in the same

age

group.