The given three pie chart compares the average spending on four kind of food by people in China, India and all over the world in the year 2008 period.

The given three pie chart compares the average spending on four kind of food by people in China, India and all over the world in the year 2008 period.
The presented pie charts demonstrate data about how much money that global inhabitants, Chinese and, Indian spent on 4 various foods in 2008.
Overall
, it was important that processed
food
was the main meal of the people weal nuts and seeds have the lowest amount in all of them other than
China
, and the minimum was animal
food
.
According to
the graphs, the initial was Processed
food
, which was the most popular selection all over the
world
, owing to the fact that the
world
was 41%;
then
India
at 39% was second and
lastly
, was
China
at 34%.
Secondly
, they were vegetables and fruits, in the
world
and
China
;
moreover
, in these
sectors
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China
by
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32% was the first;
thereafter
, the
world
and
India
had 3% and 9% less than
China
. The diagrams show Animal
food
, was the second factor in
India
at 27%, was 26% for the
world
and for
China
was non-important and the percentage was roughly half of the prior one. Not regular meals in all of them except
China
were nuts and seeds, which was 19% and third one in
China
;
moreover
,
India
and
world
respectively 11% and 4%.
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