The pie chart below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in new zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selcting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts
illustrates
the information that retail sector's online Change the verb form
illustrate
sales
in New Zealand such
as travel
, film, books and clothes in various two perios
2003 Correct your spelling
periods
period
amd
2013Correct your spelling
and
..
Units are measured by percentage.
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.
...
Overall
, it can be seen that,
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apply
travel
and
film and music online shopping Correct word choice
apply
sales
were
the highest Verb problem
had
sales
ratio.
In detail, travel
online shopping sales
was
the highest Change the verb form
were
sales
than books in 2003, at 36% and just below a fifth respectively, but travel
decreased by 7 per cent and books sales
increased by 4% in 2013.
Furthermore
, films and music's online sales
had just above a fifth in 2003 but it increased significantly in 2013, which is a third and it was the highest sales
in 2013 than other products. In contrast
, clothing sales
were
decreased as compared to the previous period, just below a quarter in 2003 but it decreased by 8 per cent in 2013.Unnecessary verb
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, travel with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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