The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the inforamtion by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the amount of
price
variation of three different materials in each month during 2014.
Overall
, it is clear that
nickel price
has more changing over months
shown, Correct article usage
the months
while
the price
of copper had a limitation
range of variation. All three materials had stable Replace the word
limited
price
Fix the agreement mistake
prices
during
July till September.
In January, the Change preposition
from
price
of nickel was in
Change preposition
at
higher
level, but it collapsed dramatically to a minimum point in June .After that, it increased slowly until the end of Correct article usage
a higher
period
and Add an article
the period
touch
Wrong verb form
touched
the
Correct article usage
a
price
about 5% lower than the price
at the beginning of the year.
The price
of Copper and zinc started lower than nickel at the beginning of the year. Both of them had a fluctuating trend. Zinc experienced the highest price
in February with 2% growth compare
with the beginning Change the form of the verb
compared
price
,however
at the end
of the period its price
was 1% more than the first ones
. Correct your spelling
one
In contrast
, Copper
Add an article
the Copper
price
was
a downward trend till May and June and after that grew gently and Verb problem
showed
became
Verb problem
apply
finally
0.5% lower than the beginning price
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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