Describe a restaurant or a cafe you often go to. You should say: 👍 Where it is What it looks like What kind of services are provided What kind of food you like there/ What kind of food is famous? And say why you like it
I’ll start to talk about my
fascinating
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favourite
restaurant
and often go there. It’s
a buffet and Hong Kong’s hotpot style. It’s
named MONGKOK. The first time I ate there was a year ago at The mall
Ngamwongwan department store. But after that, I usually go to the M9 square branch on Huai Kwang Correct your spelling
the Mall
road
more often because Capitalize word
Road
it’s
less crowded and there’s plenty of parking. I think I eat there with my friend once a month. The cuisine is inspired from
Hong Change preposition
by
Kong’s
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Kong
street
and the decor features vibrance red and Fix the agreement mistake
streets
colorful
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colourful
colors
that made me hungrier when I visited; Change the spelling
colours
in addition
, there are two types of table
that are a long counter for those who come alone and Fix the agreement mistake
tables
the
family seats. Correct article usage
apply
Personally
I often choose family seats because Add a comma
Personally,
It’s
quite convenient when I want to talk with my friends. MONGKOK is our favorite
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favourite
restaurant
because we both love the taste of soups and the varieties
of foods. I think there are five categories of soups and my friend loves mushroom soup. As for me, I prefer MALA soup over others. In the Fix the agreement mistake
variety
restaurant
, there is a large fridge for keeping fresh foods such
as pork, fish, and vegetables. The counter bar contains a lot of ingredients of sauces which we serve ourselves. we
can mix all Capitalize word
We
ingredients
as we like. Correct article usage
the ingredients
Also
, there are various ready-cooked dishes and a wide variety of desserts. The famous dish here is pudding milk and of course the hot pot for sure. For my part, I used to eat pudding milk one or two times and I don’t like it. I prefer to eat hot pot and Dim sum over
. So, from all of that, I was exceedingly impressed by Change preposition
apply
this
restaurant
because there are a lot of categories of foods and the location matches with
my choice so it is a cuisine that I often go to.Change preposition
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task achievement
Try to avoid repetition of certain words and phrases (e.g., 'MONGKOK') to make your writing more varied.
coherence cohesion
Consider using transitional phrases like 'moreover' or 'furthermore' to connect your ideas more smoothly.
task achievement
You provided a detailed description of the restaurant including its name, location, and atmosphere.
coherence cohesion
The use of descriptive language such as 'vibrant red' and 'colorful colors' adds vividness to your writing.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.