Describe a restaurant or a cafe you often go to. You should say: 👍 Where it is What it looks like What kind of services are provided What kind of food you like there/ What kind of food is famous? And say why you like it

I’ll start to talk about my
fascinating
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favourite
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restaurant
and often go there.
It’s
a buffet and Hong Kong’s hotpot style.
It’s
named MONGKOK. The first time I ate there was a year ago at
The mall
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Ngamwongwan department store. But after that, I usually go to the M9 square branch on Huai Kwang
road
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more often because
it’s
less crowded and there’s plenty of parking. I think I eat there with my friend once a month. The cuisine is inspired
from
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Hong
Kong’s
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Kong
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street
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and the decor features vibrance red and
colorful
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colors
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that made me hungrier when I visited;
in addition
, there are two types of
table
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tables
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that are a long counter for those who come alone and
the
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family seats.
Personally
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Personally,
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I often choose family seats because
It’s
quite convenient when I want to talk with my friends. MONGKOK is our
favorite
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favourite
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restaurant
because we both love the taste of soups and the
varieties
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variety
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of foods. I think there are five categories of soups and my friend loves mushroom soup. As for me, I prefer MALA soup over others. In the
restaurant
, there is a large fridge for keeping fresh foods
such
as pork, fish, and vegetables. The counter bar contains a lot of ingredients of sauces which we serve ourselves.
we
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can mix all
ingredients
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the ingredients
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as we like.
Also
, there are various ready-cooked dishes and a wide variety of desserts. The famous dish here is pudding milk and of course the hot pot for sure. For my part, I used to eat pudding milk one or two times and I don’t like it. I prefer to eat hot pot and Dim sum
over
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. So, from all of that, I was exceedingly impressed by
this
restaurant
because there are a lot of categories of foods and the location matches
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my choice so it is a cuisine that I often go to.
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task achievement
Try to avoid repetition of certain words and phrases (e.g., 'MONGKOK') to make your writing more varied.
coherence cohesion
Consider using transitional phrases like 'moreover' or 'furthermore' to connect your ideas more smoothly.
task achievement
You provided a detailed description of the restaurant including its name, location, and atmosphere.
coherence cohesion
The use of descriptive language such as 'vibrant red' and 'colorful colors' adds vividness to your writing.

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