Some people think having a university degree is the best way to secure a good job. However, others believes skills and experience are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Some people think that to gain access to strong job opportunities, a

person

needs to have a

university

degree

.

However

, others believe that being successful depends on

experience

and skills to work. The first opinion is about

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education

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profession,

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have a

university

degree

. High

education

often helps develop critical thinking, problem-solving, and specialised skills that are valuable in the workforce. Certain professions and industries often require a

degree

as a minimum entry requirement. Without it, you might find yourself excluded from these opportunities. In some fields,

such

as medicine, law, and engineering,

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is essential for obtaining the necessary licenses and certifications to practice professionally. Some people argue that a

degree

is not always necessary for securing a goal job, emphasising the importance of skills and

experience

. There are different ways of

education

,

such

as online courses, certifications and workshops they can provide specialised knowledge And training without the need for a traditional

degree

. In some rules,

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results can demonstrate your value to potential employers more

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than a

degree

. In my

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to have a successful career and job, people must have an

education

from

university

. Because it’s promising a lot, and the company where the

person

will work, will be much more confident

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since

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worker is an educated

person

. But of course, not every

person

who graduated from

university

is able to work

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and experienced. For

this

, I’d like to give a solution: to intern at companies and gain

experience

while

studying at the

university

for résumé. In conclusion, we talked about the two opinions:

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a

degree

or just abilities. Actually, to be more clear with career, an expert who has an academic background

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experience

that

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résumé

while

attending higher

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programs will have definitely incredible

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and profit.