The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in the US from 1983 to 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two charts compare the percentage change of some
energy
categories between 1983 and 2003 in the US.
Overall
, it is evident that oil and coal showed a decreasing rate shift, whereas
the amount of nuclear power and natural gas significantly increased. Meanwhile, the proportion of hydropower
energy
remained unchanged in
two decades.
In 1983, Change preposition
for
hydropower
production had the largest proportion amongst other powers, amounting to 47% of total
. Coal followed in the next position, it contributed 23% of total Add an article
the total
energy
, then
nuclear power produced showed Correct article usage
a similarly
similarly
rate at 20%. Change the word
similar
While
natural gas contribution was 11% of total energy
, hydropower
was only 4%, making it the least energy
produced in that year.
By 2003, the contribution of hydropower
fell to 38%, however
, it maintained its dominant position. Coal production also
significantly dropped to 13%. In contrast
, the production of nuclear power surged to 24%, replacing coal's position. Natural gas exhibited a sharp increasing proportion to 21% of total energy
. Meanwhile, hydropower
contibuted
stable at 4%.Correct your spelling
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, hydropower with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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