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The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel force in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel force in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the
units
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 of electricity generated from five fuel sources (Coal,
Oil
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, Natural
Gas
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, Hydro
Power
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, and Nuclear
Power
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) in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. In Australia, coal was the dominant source in both 1980 and 2000, accounting for 50
units
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 in 1980 and 130
units
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 in 2000. The total electricity production increased from 100
units
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 to 170
units
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 over the period. Meanwhile,
oil
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 and natural
gas
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 both decreased, with
oil
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 falling from 20
units
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 in 1980 to 2
units
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 in 2000, and natural
gas
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 from 10
units
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 to 2
units
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.
Hydro
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Hydropower
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power
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 slightly rose from 20 to 36
units
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. In France, nuclear
power
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 saw a dramatic increase from 15
units
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 in 1980 to 126
units
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 in 2000, becoming the largest source. Total electricity production
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 doubled from 90 to 180
units
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. Other sources,
such
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 as coal,
oil
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, and natural
gas
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, either stayed constant or decreased.
Overall
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, both countries saw increases in total production, but
while
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 Australia relied more on coal, France shifted significantly toward nuclear energy by 2000.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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