The chart below gives information on the percentage of British poeple giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows the proportion of
british
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British
people
giving money to charity in 1990 and in 2010, comparing 5 groups divided in different age ranges.
In 1990 the 36-50 is the most generous with an astonishing 42% of people
donating! Unfortunatly
in 2010 Correct your spelling
Unfortunately
people
of the same age weren't so charitable and percentage
dropped to 35% which was still the second highest of that year equally with the over 65. In 2010 Correct article usage
the percentage
this
primate was taken by the
51-65, with an almost 40%, a big improvement compared to the 35% Correct article usage
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of
1990.
The least kind one has been both in the years 1990 and 2010 the 18-25 years old. They Change preposition
in
stared
with a decent percentage of roughly 17% in 1990, to a terrible drop of 10% arriving at 7% in 2010.
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started
This
pattern was common in this
20 years
period. In fact, three groups out of five showed a drop in the Correct your spelling
20-year
propotion
of Correct your spelling
proportion
people
donating. It also
can be seen that the older the people
get the more generous they are, as we can see from the last
two groups improvement.Submitted by alessandro.talese on
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