The chart below gives information on the percentage of British poeple giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information on the percentage of British poeple giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows the proportion of
british
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people
giving money to charity in 1990 and in 2010, comparing 5 groups divided in different age ranges. In 1990 the 36-50 is the most generous with an astonishing 42% of
people
donating!
Unfortunatly
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in 2010
people
of the same age weren't so charitable and
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the percentage
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dropped to 35% which was still the second highest of that year equally with the over 65. In 2010
this
primate was taken by
the
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51-65, with an almost 40%, a big improvement compared to the 35%
of
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in
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1990. The least kind one has been both in the years 1990 and 2010 the 18-25 years old. They
stared
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started
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with a decent percentage of roughly 17% in 1990, to a terrible drop of 10% arriving at 7% in 2010.
This
pattern was common in
this
20 years
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20-year
period. In fact, three groups out of five showed a drop in the
propotion
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proportion
of
people
donating. It
also
can be seen that the older the
people
get the more generous they are, as we can see from the
last
two groups improvement.
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