The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows the distribution of British people spending
money
on charity
by age
range
for the years 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, the highest proportion
of age
range
was 36-50 in 1990, it was 51-65 in 2010. It can be seen that the lowest percentage of charity
spending was the young generation whose age
between 18 and 25, for both year
.
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years
To begin
with
the year 1990, when Add a comma
with,
age
were
getting older until the Change the verb form
was
age
of 50, individuals giving money
to charity
increased. After the age
of 50, the proportion
of British poeple
who spend Correct your spelling
people
money
to
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on
charity
decreased. For the year 2010, the distribution of individuals went up from the youngest age
range
to the range
of 51-65; however
, the proportion
slightly decreased for elderly
.
It can be observed that in Correct article usage
the elderly
initial
three Correct article usage
the initial
age
group
which are, 18-25, 26-35 and 36-50 respectively, the Fix the agreement mistake
groups
proportion
rate has been
decreased in two Unnecessary verb
apply
decade
. Change to a plural noun
decades
On the other hand
, in 2010, elderly people tend
to give more Wrong verb form
tended
money
to charties
than in 1990.Correct your spelling
charities
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, charity, age, range, proportion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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