The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the distribution of British people spending

money

on

charity

by

age

range

for the years 1990 and 2010.

Overall

, the highest

proportion

of

age

range

was 36-50 in 1990, it was 51-65 in 2010. It can be seen that the lowest percentage of

charity

spending was the young generation whose

age

between 18 and 25, for both

year

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.

To begin

with

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the year 1990, when

age

were

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getting older until the

age

of 50, individuals giving

money

to

charity

increased. After the

age

of 50, the

proportion

of British

poeple

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people

who spend

money

to

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on

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charity

decreased. For the year 2010, the distribution of individuals went up from the youngest

age

range

to the

range

of 51-65;

however

, the

proportion

slightly decreased for

elderly

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the elderly

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. It can be observed that in

initial

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three

age

group

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groups

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which are, 18-25, 26-35 and 36-50 respectively, the

proportion

rate has

been

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decreased in two

decade

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.

On the other hand

, in 2010, elderly people

tend

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tended

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to give more

money

to

charties

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charities

than in 1990.