You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graphs illustrate the percentage of female individuals, who graduated
from
higher degrees, in five different Change preposition
with
countries
(the UK, the USA, Australia
, South Korea, and France) between the years
1980 and 2015.
Overall
, in Australia
, the percentage of women
who went into higher education remained the same with almost 60% in both years
. Except for Australia
, the ratio of graduated females increased in other
four Correct article usage
the other
countries
in 35 years
. Despite of
that Change preposition
apply
increasing
, the Replace the word
increase
percentages
of graduated Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
women
for
all Change preposition
in
countries
were
still under 60% in 2015.
In 1980, the ratio of female individuals, who went to college, was 50% in France Correct subject-verb agreement
was
in
1980. The amount of studying Change preposition
apply
women
of
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in
theUSA
and the UK followed with almost 40% and 35% respectively. In 2015, the USA reached almost 60% graduated Correct your spelling
the USA
women
as same as Australia
while
the UK and France had around 55% of female college students.
On the other hand
, South Korea had the least
percentage of Correct word choice
lowest
women
went
into higher education for both Correct pronoun usage
who went
years
. It had only 15% of females who went to college in 1980. Even thought
it doubled to 30% in 2015, it still was almost half of Correct your spelling
though
other
Add an article
the other
countries
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, australia, years, women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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