The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph
illustates
the manufacturing Correct your spelling
illustrates
rated
of the leading fuel resources in the UK from 1981 to 2000.
Change the form of the verb
rate
Overall
, the level of petroleum fluctuated in
19 years but ended up growing. Change preposition
over
While
natural gas ratings increased each year
, with minor exceptions, coal energy units number
actually lowered during that time.
First of all, in 1981, petroleum levels were pretty high and Fix the agreement mistake
unit numbers
it
kept increasing until the Correct pronoun usage
they
year
of
1987. That's when the graph for petrol started Change preposition
apply
deacreasing
, but eventually, it showed Correct your spelling
decreasing
the
continuous growth since 1990. Correct article usage
apply
However
, the same could not be told
about coal unit numbers. It faced an incredible loss of over 40 energy units in 1984. Even thoughVerb problem
said
,
carbon ratings showed some growth after that, it was still the least Remove the comma
apply
producted
fuel source after nearly 2 decades.
Correct your spelling
produced
Lastly
, meanwhile
other materials displayed some fluctuations in their energy amounts, Add a comma
meanwhile,
natural
gas kept on skyrocketing. Till the Correct word choice
and natural
year
of
1990, the graph was kind of straight, Change preposition
apply
however
after that exact year
, it grew up to the number 2.5 times higher than its first state.Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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