You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep? Give reasons for your answer
There is no denying the fact that having
sufficient
Add an article
a sufficient
amount
of sleep is crucial for body
and mental health. Add an article
the body
As a
recent study Change preposition
A
that
indicates a profound Correct pronoun usage
apply
relation
between having Replace the word
relationship
a
diabetes with inadequate sleep Change the article
apply
time
. This
essay will discuss what can
lack of sleep causes and what is the most applicable approaches to cut Verb problem
apply
of
the consequences of the issue.
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off
beging
with, there are many risks of being late Correct your spelling
begin
night
lover and having Correct your spelling
late-night
a
little Correct article usage
apply
time
to sleep which could directly affecting
human beings. Change the verb form
affect
be affecting
Firstly
, it leads to uncountable difficulities
and problems. Correct your spelling
difficulties
in other words
, the overall
individual's health would be suffering coincided with less time
of sleep where the functionality of Correct article usage
the human's
human's
brain would not Change noun form
human
processing
properly. Wrong verb form
process
In addition
, having unsustainable psychological status who
people might Correct pronoun usage
apply
encountered
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encounter
due to
irregular recovery time
which is the
significant advantage of sleeping well.
In terms of potential solutions, Correct article usage
a
consider
having a healthy diet Wrong verb form
considering
and
maintaining fasting and Acquiring Correct word choice
apply
healthy
lifestyle is a vital approach to gradually tackle Correct article usage
a healthy
this
issue.
It is Rephrase
gradually.
also
possible to say that habbit
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habit
rabbit
out
of consuming fast food and high Change preposition
apply
amount
of sugar in daily meals would Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
enormusely
assist in Correct your spelling
enormously
sleeping related
issues. Add a hyphen
sleeping-related
For instance
, people who are foody and addective
to highly contaminated meals ( full of salt and sugar Correct your spelling
addicted
ingridents
) might increase the Correct your spelling
ingredients
possibilty
of having a heart attack because they consumed Correct your spelling
possibility
unattainable
Correct article usage
an unattainable
amount
of harmful minerals.
In conclusion, there are many issues related to not sleeping well. it is also
true that with
being on a healthy lifestyle and Change preposition
by
and
eating Remove the redundancy
apply
Correct article usage
a resonable
resonable
Correct your spelling
reasonable
amount
of food we could increamentally
overcome Correct your spelling
incrementally
this
problem.Submitted by sultanali770 on
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