You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The chart above displays the variation in levels of
post-school
degrees in Australia and the number of men
and women who held them in 1999 .
On the whole , the Skilled Vocational Diploma
was the most held degree
among men
, unlike women who presented the lowest percentage.
On the one hand ,70% of females noticeably selected an Undergraduate Diploma
in their post-school
pathway. While
few of them chose the Skilled Vocational Diploma
by only 10% . Bachelor's degree
and Masters's degree
were picked by 50% and 40% respectively . 30% of females decided to hold a postgraduate Diploma
.
On the other hand
, 90% of men
chose the Skilled Vocational Diploma
as their next step in post-school
qualification , followed by a Postgraduate Diploma
with 70% of the overall
percentage. Then
,men
who preferred a Masters Degree
demonstrated 60% . next , those who decided to hold a Bachelor's degree
showed almost 45% of the total . While
Undergraduate Diploma
holders displayed the lowest figure by only 35% .
To conclude
, a variability in post-school
qualifications in Australia in 1999 was seen between men
and women .Submitted by hindgadeem123 on
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