You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The bar graph illustrates
information
regarding the rate of five significant businesses in Canada which made e-commerce purchases in industries from 2015 to 2019.
Overall
, information
and communications played a crucial part in Canada's The bar graph illustrates information
regarding the rate of five significant businesses in Canada which made e-commerce purchases in industries from 2015 to 2019.
On clear observation, we can see that the Wholesale had increased slightly between 2015 to 2019 with 40% ,50%, 52%, 59%, and 62% respectively. Besides
that Construction rose slowly from 22% to 60% in the years 2015 and 2019. Furthermore
, although
there is a high domain on information
& communications in the given time hit approximately 73% in 2018. In addition
, there are quite the same percentages in making Retail with about 59% and 58% in 2018 and 2019 respectively as e-business. Moreover
, manufacturing was one of the e-commerce which had an unstable rates
of about 31%, 51%, 45%, 50, and 59% in 2015-2019 respectively.
In conclusion, the proportion of baying electronic devices witnessed wobbling from 2015 to 2019. over all periods Correct the article-noun agreement
an unstable rate
unstable rates
while
construction had the lowest ratio in producing electronic business.Submitted by sheikha1996mohammed on
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