The following diagram shows the process of cloning a sheep. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The flow diagram illustrates the cloning process of
sheep
to give a
birth Correct article usage
apply
new
Change preposition
to new
sheep
wihtout
male Correct your spelling
without
sheep
involved. In brief, by combining a part of egg
cells
and body cells
from different sheeps
, the process will produce an embryo which is placed into Correct your spelling
sheep
uterus
, before it grows into a new cloned Add an article
the uterus
sheep
.
First of all, there are two different cells
that should be taken from sheeps
, Correct your spelling
sheep
such
as body cell
and Fix the agreement mistake
cells
egg
cell
. As the illustration Fix the agreement mistake
cells
shown
, Wrong verb form
shows
body
Correct article usage
a body
cell
is taken from Sheep
A to extract the DNA
. Meanwhile, egg
Add an article
the egg
cell
is picked up from Sheep
B and removes its nucleus. After extracted DNA
and egg
cells
without nucleus
are obtained, the extracted Add an article
a nucleus
DNA
is merged with the egg
cells
. Afterwards, this
combined cell
will develop into embryo
which is ready to be placed in Add an article
an embryo
uterus
. The embryo will develop into a cloned Add an article
the uterus
sheep
of Sheep
A because it has same
Correct article usage
the same
DNA
with
Change preposition
as
Sheep
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sheep, egg, cells, cell, dna with synonyms.
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