The following diagram shows the process of cloning a sheep. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The following diagram shows the process of cloning a sheep.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The flow diagram illustrates the cloning process of
sheep
to give
a
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apply
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birth
new
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to new
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sheep
wihtout
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without
male
sheep
involved. In brief, by combining a part of
egg
cells
and body
cells
from different
sheeps
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sheep
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, the process will produce an embryo which is placed into
uterus
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the uterus
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, before it grows into a new cloned
sheep
. First of all, there are two different
cells
that should be taken from
sheeps
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sheep
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,
such
as body
cell
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cells
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and
egg
cell
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cells
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. As the illustration
shown
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,
body
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a body
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cell
is taken from
Sheep
A to extract the
DNA
. Meanwhile,
egg
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the egg
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cell
is picked up from
Sheep
B and removes its nucleus. After extracted
DNA
and
egg
cells
without
nucleus
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a nucleus
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are obtained, the extracted
DNA
is merged with the
egg
cells
. Afterwards,
this
combined
cell
will develop into
embryo
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an embryo
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which is ready to be placed in
uterus
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the uterus
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. The embryo will develop into a cloned
sheep
of
Sheep
A because it has
same
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the same
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DNA
with
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as
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Sheep
A.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sheep, egg, cells, cell, dna with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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