The graph shows the population figures for different types of turtles in india.

The graph shows the population figures for different types of turtles in india.
The line graph depicts the
population
of 19
species
of
Leatherback
turtles
, 38
species
of Green
turtles
, and 20
species
of Olive
Ridley
turtles
,
as well as
a of total 111
species
living in India from 1980 to 2012. The graph illustrates numbers considering that there were 100
turtles
in 1980.
Overall
, the
population
of
Leatherback
turtles
severely declined,
conversely
, the
population
of Olive
Ridley
turtles
flourished over the years.
On the other hand
, the
population
of Green
turtles
and the
overall
population
of all
species
remained relatively steady. The number of
Leatherback
turtles
increased steadily up to 110 by 1988, upon which it lowered incrementally to 60 by 2012.
However
, the
population
of Olive
Ridley
turtles
multiplied substantially reaching about 135 in 1996, following which it fluctuated over the years, but remained at more than 120 throughout the time frame.
In contrast
, the number of green
turtles
and the total count stayed between 80-110 despite the fluctuations. In conclusion, Olive
Ridley
turtles
had the highest
population
, followed by green
turtles
, and
lastly
,
Leatherback
turtles
had the lowest
population
.
Additionally
, the
population
of all 111
species
stayed relatively constant.
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