The line graph shows how much money overseas visitors spent in the UK from 1980 - 2010 and the pie charts show the reasons for their visits in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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travelers' expenditures in the UK, between 1980 and 2010, units are given in millions

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of pound

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pound

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. The pie charts illustrate the visiting reasons in 1980 and 2010.

Overall

, it can be clearly seen that the highest amount of money was spent in 1995.

Additionally

, the majority of visitors came to the UK in order to have a holiday in both years.

Initially

, tourists' expenditures were just above 5,500

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million

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nearly doubled from 1980 to 1995. It can be observed that there was a downward trend between 1995 and 2000;

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, the amount of money spent in

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the UK

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increased again after the year 2000. Regarding of reasons for the

visists

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, visiting family members or friends

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increased by nearly 10%, from 18.7% to 28.2%. The main difference was in the category

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named other, which decreased by half. The proportion of tourists fell by 5%, from 44.1 to 39.1 in 3 decades.