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The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart below illustrates the number of transport modes and car usage in Edmonton. The majority of people
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 cars, with commuting to work being the most popular reason for doing so. Most citizens prefer the LRT. Other types of vehicles used include buses and taxis. As can be seen from the pie chart, 45% of people choose to
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 a car. Another 35% of residents select the LRT, and the remaining 20% is divided between buses and taxis. The table shows the reasons why people
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 cars in the city. 55%
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 them to commute to work, another 45% for business purposes, 40% drive to take children to school, and the remaining 15%
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 cars for shopping and leisure activities

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • transportation modes
  • car ownership
  • proportion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • transportation habits
  • environmental awareness
  • government policies
  • public transport infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • congestion
  • environmental quality
  • future implications
  • adapt
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