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he graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

he graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
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The provided bar graph gives information about how many
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percentage
 of
women
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 unemployed in the four countries of the UK over a two-year period between 2013 and 2014. it
is clearly see
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 that most countries namely England, Wales and Northern Ireland experienced a decrease in
unemployment
 rates,
by
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 Scotland was only one country to experience
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 increase in female
unemployment
 . Getting back to the details by 2013 England had the highest
women
rate
 of
unemployment
, which was 6.8% in
comparision
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comparison
 with the
precentages
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percentages
percentage
 of
women
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another countries
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. In others, it was
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slightly lower. (Scotland 6.1%, Northern Ireland 5.6% and the lowest
unemployment
rate
 was Wales -5.4%) In 2014 indicators were changed. Oppositely, Scotland was the only country to experience an increase in the female employment
rate
 going from 6.1% to 6.7% in 2013 and 2014
pespectively
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respectively
 making
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 the country with the largest
unemployment
rate
 among
women
 in the UK.
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