The chart illustrates distances traveled per person per week (in kilometers) in terms of 5 types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000.

The chart illustrates distances traveled per person per week (in kilometers) in terms of 5 types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000.
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The table gives information about the distances individuals travelled per week in
kilometres
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represented by five types of transport in Britain between 1990 and 2000. 
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, the total was close in both, the rail and bus were the highest in number from 1990 to 2000, in general, the rate for all of them was almost the same for both years, the lowest transport in number in 1990 was the
air
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and in 2000 was the bicycle. Starting with the total, which was 100
kilometres
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per week in 1990, it increased in 2000 and became almost 115
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, the second on the table is rail, in 1990 it was 35
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and went up a little and became 38
kilometres
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per week. The after is a bus which is very close in number camper to the rail in 1990 was exactly 40
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and increased to 42
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in 2000. The bicycle and
air
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are the opposite in rate to each other; in 1990, the bicycle had the highest rate to
air
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and went down in 2000, and the
air
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increased and became the highest
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