The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to s3x and age. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The charts

illustrates

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the tendency of purchasing

music

albums in the UK regardless of gender and

age

in various genres

such

as

pop

,

rock

, and classical

music

.

In

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overall

, no matter how old and what gender you are, the desire to buy

music

albums is always there. Though the males are found to be purchasing more than the female does, it does not change the aforementioned statement.

Also

, in order of popularity,

rock

music

albums

has

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the highest acceptance commercially, followed in order by

pop

and classical. In all three genres observed, men have the tendency to bring home an album than women do by at least 5%. Based on

age

, people between 25

-

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apply

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34

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are easier to

found

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in the list of

purchaser

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purchasers

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in

pop

and

rock

music

,

while

in classical

music

is much more in

favor

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for

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of

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a person aged more than 45 years old. You can find that

pop

and

rock

music

are more approachable to people of all

age

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ages

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,

however

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however,

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classical

music

can only reach people

on

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in

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certain

age

group

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groups

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.