The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to s3x and age. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The charts
illustrates
the tendency of purchasing Change the verb form
illustrate
music
albums in the UK regardless of gender and Use synonyms
age
in various genres Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
pop
, Use synonyms
rock
, and classical Use synonyms
music
.
Use synonyms
In
Change preposition
Overall
overall
, no matter how old and what gender you are, the desire to buy Linking Words
music
albums is always there. Though the males are found to be purchasing more than the female does, it does not change the aforementioned statement. Use synonyms
Also
, in order of popularity, Linking Words
rock
Use synonyms
music
albums Use synonyms
has
the highest acceptance commercially, followed in order by Correct subject-verb agreement
have
pop
and classical.
In all three genres observed, men have the tendency to bring home an album than women do by at least 5%. Based on Use synonyms
age
, people between 25Use synonyms
-
Change preposition
apply
34
are easier to Correct word choice
and 34
found
in the list of Wrong verb form
find
purchaser
in Fix the agreement mistake
purchasers
pop
and Use synonyms
rock
Use synonyms
music
, Use synonyms
while
in classical Linking Words
music
is much more in Use synonyms
favor
Change the spelling
favour
for
a person aged more than 45 years old. You can find that Change preposition
of
pop
and Use synonyms
rock
Use synonyms
music
are more approachable to people of all Use synonyms
Use synonyms
age
, Fix the agreement mistake
ages
Linking Words
however
classical Add the comma(s)
however,
music
can only reach people Use synonyms
on
certain Change preposition
in
age
Use synonyms
group
.Fix the agreement mistake
groups
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Vocabulary: Replace the words music, age, pop, rock with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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