The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart gives information about the proportion of males who smoked in seven different countries
as well as
the global average in 2000 and 2015.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that except in Egypt and Lebanon, in 2000 the proportion of male smokers was higher than in 2015, America had the highest proportion of cigarette consumers.
To begin
with, while
in America and Bangladesh, the distribution of smokers was higher than 70%, it decreased to just more than 50% and below 40%. In addition
, almost half of men in Cuba smoked in both of two
given years. Correct article usage
the two
Additionally
, it can be observed that smoking was almost halved in 15 years, in Mexico and Australia. Standard cigarette consumption in the world also
rose, however
there was no noticeable change which was about 10%.
Add a comma
however,
In contrast
, the usage of cigarettes increased by about 20% in Egypt. Similarly
, in Lebanon
it went up by about 10%.Add a comma
Lebanon,
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