The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph
illutrate
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illustrates
illustrate
the
crime
rate
depend
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depending
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on the
age
and pie chart
describe
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describes
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the
ratio
of different
crime
tyeps
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types
for the recent year,in England.
Overall
,
crime
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the crime
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rate
at the
age
of 20
is
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peaked, when getting older after 20 it decreased
stedly
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steadily
. There are 4
crime
types, violent
crime
, property
crime
, drug
crime
and public order
crime
with the raito, 46%, 23%, 22%,
9
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and 9
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% respectively. In
line
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graph,
first
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the first
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8
age
has no
crime
rate
,
however
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however,
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after the
age
of
8
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8,
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it is
incerasing
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increasing
steadly
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steadily
. Between 12 and 16 it
is
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went up sharply and peaked at 20. From 20 to 28
crime
rate
went down dramatically. And after 28 it
fallen
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falls
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till
age
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the age
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of 60. In
pie
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a pie
the pie
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chart,
biggest
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the biggest
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ratio
is violent
crime
.
Propert
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Property
crime
and drug
crime
had nearly
same
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the same
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ratio
. Public order
crime
has the lowest
ratio
, just below the 10.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words crime, rate, age, ratio with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.

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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • The line graph depicts
  • The pie chart illustrates
  • reveals
  • displays
  • depicts
  • the trend of
  • the overall crime rate
  • steadily decreased
  • the distribution of
  • different types of crime
  • prevalent
  • accounts for
  • the most common crime
  • followed by
  • make up
  • a smaller proportion of
  • the total crimes
  • a smaller percentage
  • approximately
  • the remaining percentage
  • It is important to note that
  • reflects
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