The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph

illutrate

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illustrates

illustrate

the

crime

rate

depend

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depending

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on the

age

and pie chart

describe

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describes

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the

ratio

of different

crime

tyeps

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types

for the recent year,in England.

Overall

crime

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the crime

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rate

at the

age

of 20

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apply

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peaked, when getting older after 20 it decreased

stedly

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steadily

. There are 4

crime

types, violent

crime

, property

crime

, drug

crime

and public order

crime

with the raito, 46%, 23%, 22%,

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and 9

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% respectively. In

line

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a line

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graph,

first

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the first

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age

has no

crime

rate

however

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however,

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after the

age

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it is

incerasing

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increasing

steadly

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steadily

. Between 12 and 16 it

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went up sharply and peaked at 20. From 20 to 28

crime

rate

went down dramatically. And after 28 it

fallen

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falls

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till

age

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the age

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of 60. In

pie

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a pie

the pie

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chart,

biggest

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the biggest

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ratio

is violent

crime

Propert

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Property

crime

and drug

crime

had nearly

same

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the same

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ratio

. Public order

crime

has the lowest

ratio

, just below the 10.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words crime, rate, age, ratio with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

146 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

The line graph depicts
The pie chart illustrates
reveals
displays
depicts
the trend of
the overall crime rate
steadily decreased
the distribution of
different types of crime
prevalent
accounts for
the most common crime
followed by
make up
a smaller proportion of
the total crimes
a smaller percentage
approximately
the remaining percentage
It is important to note that
reflects

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