The diagram shows the process of manufacturing bottled and canned water. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram shows the process of manufacturing bottled and canned water. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The figure illustrates the stages of aqua production from the source to the supermarket.
Overall
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, there are 5 stages
such
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as
water
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cleaning, heating evaporation and carbonation, mixing, filtering and filling, and packaging for both bottled and canned
water
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. The difference occurs at the fourth stage which defines how the
water
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would be filtered and filled.
Firstly
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, raw
water
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is collected from the source and it reaches the electric heaters by pomping after filtering, softening, and adding
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some chemicals. In the second stage, it is gathered in a tube to add carbon dioxide into it via a cooling pipe. The carbonated
water
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is sent to a tank to be mixed with some colouring materials, syrup, and flavour in the third level.
Then
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, the liquid was divided into two groups, which were bottles and cans. In the fourth stage, half of the liquid is bottled, and the other half is canned after filtration. The bottles and the cans are packed in different boxes. After packaging, a delivery truck brings them to the market to sell.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • raw material sourcing
  • filtration
  • purification
  • bottling
  • canning
  • packaging
  • quality control
  • distribution
  • environmental considerations
  • process flow
  • manufacture
  • treatment
  • final product
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