Higher education could be funded in three ways. all costs paid by government, all costs paid by students or student paying all costs through a government loan. what are the advantages of these choices?
higher
education
is become
an important Change to the active voice
becomes
has become
aspects
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aspect
for
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of
socity
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society
development
where it requires funds
to start and complete the needed high
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higher
education
certifications.
firstly
, when governments provide the required funds
for high education
, they will directly contribute to development
of the Add an article
the development
county
, Correct your spelling
country
this
will be
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apply
defintly
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definitely
helps
students as a golden opportunity for them to grant high degree Correct subject-verb agreement
help
ceritifcations
with no cost Correct your spelling
certifications
certification
on
them.
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to
however
, if the high
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higher
education
study need
to be provided by the student himself, the candidate will have sort of freedom Change the verb form
needs
on
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to
completion
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complete
of
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apply
this
certification on
his Change preposition
at
convenant
time without government restrictions on the completion period of the Correct your spelling
convenient
covenant
education
period.
on the other hand
, if the funds
came a
loan from Change preposition
from a
government
to Add an article
the government
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the student
a student
student
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students
this
will be
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apply
defintly
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definitely
makes
the process Correct subject-verb agreement
make
stramlined
on both Correct your spelling
streamlined
government
and Correct article usage
the government
students
goals toward civilization Change noun form
students'
student's
development
. this
will eventully
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eventually
leads
to Change the verb form
lead
boost
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a boost
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in achiving
achiving
both Correct your spelling
achieving
stakeholders
goals.
in Change noun form
stakeholder's
stakeholders'
conclution
, the three methods of Correct your spelling
conclusion
funds
are helping deffrent
aspects of the Correct your spelling
different
country
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country's
development
and will lead to the same result of obtaining the required high
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higher
education
ceritifcation
within Correct your spelling
certification
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a varity
varity
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variety
period
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periods
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task response
Try to elaborate more on each of the funding methods with specific and clear examples to provide a more comprehensive argument.
coherence cohesion
Work on the logical flow of paragraphs. Ensure that each paragraph transitions smoothly into the next one and that sentences within each paragraph are logically connected.
coherence cohesion
There are several grammar and spelling mistakes. Special attention should be paid to common errors such as 'socity' instead of 'society' and 'defintly' instead of 'definitely'.
introduction conclusion
You have attempted to introduce the topic and summarize the benefits of each funding method in your conclusion, which shows an understanding of essay structure.
Fully explain your ideas
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
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