The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
The two charts illustrate
visits
to and from the UK
between 1979-1999 and the bar graph demonstrates the most famous countries visited by UK
inhabitants in 1999.It is obvious that,
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visits
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France
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the country
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in 1999, in the same year Turkey
was the lowest country visited by UK
residents
.In 1999 the amount of the
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visits
abroad by UK
residents
increased by approximately more than 5 times compared to 1979.
In 1979 visits
to the UK
by overseas residents
consisted of almost 10 million people
then
we can see that same year visits
abroad by UK
residents
were a little bit more than other ones. Same year we can see almost same
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residents
a little bit more than other
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UK
. After 1989, Correct article usage
the UK
visits
to and from the UK
showed an increased tendency all the way up. In 1999, we can see the best results of in
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visits
to and from the UK
. Visits
abroad by UK
residents
increased almost 5 times, in the other one we can’t see a significant change nevertheless
, it increased approximately more than 3 times.
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France
has the most significant pose than the other countries.More than 10 million people
visit to
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France
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Additionally
people
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Turkey
in 1999.Spain,the USA,Greece
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and Greece
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average
people
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Turkey
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