The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the layout of Bunborough in our day and future plans
of
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the village.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that there will be more accommodation and transportation facilities which are planned to be finished in Autumn 2024.
To begin
with transportation, it is planned to build a railway which starts south of the villages to the northeast and a bridge will be needed in order to cross the river.
Additionally
, there will be a new road which provides an easier way to go to
centre
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the centre
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Instead
of fishing ports, it will be set up a promenade. When it comes to accommodation, it can be observed that the number of houses will be extended.
In addition
, two hotels will be built. One of them will be near the beach, the other will be located in the village centre where people can reach easily shopping places or
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the promenade
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promenade
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promenades
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.
However
, there will be no difference in the shopping area.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Anticipation
  • Significant
  • Conversion
  • Commercial activities
  • Expansion
  • Enhancing
  • Bypassing
  • Congestion
  • Connectivity
  • Recreational area
  • Demolition
  • Infrastructure
  • Preservation
  • Public transportation hub
  • Encourage
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