The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data gives information about the monthly price changes of
metals
in 2014.
Overall
, the rates of all the chemicals growing, the most constant metals
are copper
and zinc
, however
, the nickel
diagram was flexible.
In January nickel
, zinc
and copper
cost are included by 6%, 2%,and 1% respectively. Next four months, the rates of all metals
increased constantly, only in February did the cost of zinc
grow by 2%. In addition
, in June the prices of zinc
and nickel
decreased by 3% of nickel
and 1% of zinc
. Therefore
, copper
in June grew by 0.5%.
Regarding the period from July to October the figure for metals
was stable. Three months in a row nickel
grew down by 1%, copper
increased by 1% and zinc
grew by 0.5%. The proportion of chemicals at the end
of the year increased and finally
in December figures formed 1%, 1.5%,and 2
% for nickel
, copper
and zinc
respectively.Submitted by bizhanalikhan6 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words metals, copper, zinc, nickel with synonyms.
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