The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the change in the prices of three metals(copper,
nickel
and zinc
) during the year
2014. Moreover
, all values are measured in proportions.
Overall
, the nickel
had significant fluctuations, while
copper and zinc
were more balanced. Moreover
, by the end of the year
, all of them were nearby for each other. Over the first half of the year
costs of metals decreased. And then
, they experienced a slight increase for the end of the year
.
The biggest growth was made by nickel
, and it was approximately 6 per cent in January. While
, copper and zinc
's maximum changes were about 2%,and 3%, and like a nickel
, they had records at the beginning of the year
, especially January and February.
On the other hand
, the lowest proportional change was made by nickel
, which was about -3%, in the middle of the period, June. Whereas
nickel
and zinc
had less variable decreases, the record was roughly -1%.Submitted by bizhanalikhan6 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words nickel, zinc, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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