The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the change in the prices of three metals(copper,
nickel
and Use synonyms
zinc
) during the Use synonyms
year
2014. Use synonyms
Moreover
, all values are measured in proportions.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
nickel
had significant fluctuations, Use synonyms
while
copper and Linking Words
zinc
were more balanced. Use synonyms
Moreover
, by the end of the Linking Words
year
, all of them were nearby for each other. Over the first half of the Use synonyms
year
costs of metals decreased. And Use synonyms
then
, they experienced a slight increase for the end of the Linking Words
year
.
The biggest growth was made by Use synonyms
nickel
, and it was approximately 6 per cent in January. Use synonyms
While
, copper and Linking Words
zinc
's maximum changes were about 2%,and 3%, and like a Use synonyms
nickel
, they had records at the beginning of the Use synonyms
year
, especially January and February.
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On the other hand
, the lowest proportional change was made by Linking Words
nickel
, which was about -3%, in the middle of the period, June. Use synonyms
Whereas
Linking Words
nickel
and Use synonyms
zinc
had less variable decreases, the record was roughly -1%.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words nickel, zinc, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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