In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In recent times, most nations’ residents are able to go to the supermarkets and purchase the dishes which
produced
around the whole world. I Add a missing verb
are produced
am strongly believe
that Change the verb form
strongly believe
this
is an affirmative development, because customers can experience the taste of foods
that they have never seen and those products provide a
various Correct article usage
apply
choice
of meals for humans.
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choices
Firstly
, the food that performed
from different countries could be seen Verb problem
comes
interesting
for the people who have not tried Change preposition
as interesting
them
. Since, Correct pronoun usage
it
modern
lifestyle of individuals Correct article usage
the modern
getting
boring year by year they want to feel something new. Mostly they went Wrong verb form
gets
to
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apply
try
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tried
traditional
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the traditional
foods
of that country, due
to Correct word choice
but due
visa
they Fix the agreement mistake
visas
cannot
afford them there. In that case, they could experience it again from the shops that have the meals from overseas. Wrong verb form
could not
For example
, in the past nobody saw the Japanese food called ‘ramen’, however
now ramen become to
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apply
the
popular food in the daily life of people, and they can get Correct article usage
a
them
in every market.
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it
Secondly
, sometimes residents suffer from the shortage of foods
in their nations. Fix the agreement mistake
food
Nevertheless
, it can be solved via
transporting some Change preposition
by
foods
from the
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apply
oversea
. It means that those dishes can be a solution Correct your spelling
overseas
for
the global problem Change preposition
to
such
as hunger. For example
, majority
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the majority
countries
in Africa have Change preposition
of countries
issue
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issues
about ensure
citizens with Change preposition
with ensuring
foods
and water, but now the situation getting better
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
food
due to
these provided reasons and examples, I am sure that buying meals in stores nowadays is a favorable
development for the whole world. Since it can be salvations for Change the spelling
favourable
the
most peopleCorrect article usage
apply
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