To the right is a line graph which shows the number of farms and farm workers in the United States from 1910 – 2000.  Describe the information in the graph. Write at least 150 words.

To the right is a line graph which shows the number of farms and farm workers in the United States from 1910 – 2000. 

Describe the information in the graph. Write at least 150 words.
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This
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chart illustrates the
amount
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number
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of farmers and farms in the USA between 1910 and 2000.
Overall
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, Farmworkers and farmlands remained relatively stable by 1940.
However
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, both of them experienced a dramatic decline from 1940 to 1985. Afterwards, they both remained flat until 2000. Whilst the
number
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of farms was about 6
million
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, the individuals working on farms were almost 13,5
million
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in 1910.
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, the
number
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of farmworkers decreased slightly to 10
million
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by 1950.
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, from 1950 onward, they fell drastically and reached approximately 4
million
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in 1960.
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, from 1960 to 1975,
number
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of the farmers showed a slow decrease.
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, they remained steady at around 3
million
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by 2010.
On the other hand
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, the
number
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of farming areas was almost 6
million
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in 1901 and they were stable by 1935. But, from 1935 to 2000, the
number
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of plantations dropped gradually and reached 2
million
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in estimate and afterwards, they levelled off at around
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number
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • steadily declined
  • sharp decrease
  • fluctuated
  • peaked
  • plateaued
  • consistent downward trend
  • correlation
  • inverse relationship
  • notable increase
  • plunge
  • coincide
  • drastically
  • proportionally
  • trends
  • timeline
  • significant change
  • marked difference
  • fell dramatically
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