To the right is a line graph which shows the number of farms and farm workers in the United States from 1910 – 2000. Describe the information in the graph. Write at least 150 words.
This
chart illustrates the Linking Words
amount
of farmers and farms in the USA between 1910 and 2000.
Change the quantifier
number
Overall
, Farmworkers and farmlands remained relatively stable by 1940. Linking Words
However
, both of them experienced a dramatic decline from 1940 to 1985. Afterwards, they both remained flat until 2000.
Whilst the Linking Words
number
of farms was about 6 Use synonyms
million
, the individuals working on farms were almost 13,5 Use synonyms
million
in 1910. Use synonyms
Nonetheless
, the Linking Words
number
of farmworkers decreased slightly to 10 Use synonyms
million
by 1950. Use synonyms
Besides
, from 1950 onward, they fell drastically and reached approximately 4 Linking Words
million
in 1960. Use synonyms
In contrast
, from 1960 to 1975, Linking Words
number
of the farmers showed a slow decrease. Use synonyms
However
, they remained steady at around 3 Linking Words
million
by 2010.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
number
of farming areas was almost 6 Use synonyms
million
in 1901 and they were stable by 1935. But, from 1935 to 2000, the Use synonyms
number
of plantations dropped gradually and reached 2 Use synonyms
million
in estimate and afterwards, they levelled off at around Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
number
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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