The bar chart shows the top ten countires for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and make comparison where relevant.
The data displays the top ten countries when it comes to producing and consuming electricity in the year 2014.
It is clear that
China has the largest usage of electricty
pertaining to both consuming and producing electricity with the Correct your spelling
electricity
united states
being a close second.
The rest of the countries in the graph are close to Correct your spelling
United States
eachother
.Correct your spelling
each other
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