The diagram shows the process of manufacturing bottled and canned water. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The map diagram above depicts the process of mineral

water's

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production in

the

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bottles and cans. At

first,

the

stage

name is

water

cleaning. At

this

step, the raw material of

water

will be cleaned. After that, it will be entered

to

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water

softeners and chemicals. As soon as, it will be pumped.

Furthermore

,

the

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stage

two is heating evaporation and carbonation. After the

water

have

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been cleaned, the

water

will be processed in electric heaters.

Then

, the pipe will cool it and mix with carbon dioxide.

Next,

the

water

will be distributed to

mixing

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tank

use

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using

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a

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carbonated

water

.

Moreover

, the

stage

three is mixing. There will be a mixing tank

in

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which contains three tools,

such

as colouring, syrup, and flavour. Immediately, it will be filtered and the stages of manufacturing

have been

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done. The two

last

stage

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are filtering and filling

also

packaging. At

stage

four, the

water

will be separated into bottles or cans in different boxes.

Finally

, the boxes will be delivered to supermarkets.