The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the average change in the
price
of copper
, nickel and zinc
for each month threw 2014.
Overall
, we can see that the nickel was by far the highest percentage change at the beginning of the year
but ended as the lowest one
of the three at the end
of the year
. While
, zinc
started the year
with the lowest percentage change, although
it ended at the highest point. Copper
prices had a limited range of variation.
In January the price
of nickle
was up six per Correct your spelling
nickel
cent
, but by the middle of the year
in June it dropped to negative 3, finally
copper
ended the year
with a one
per cent
rise. Copper
started with a two per cent
increase and the price
started dropping for the next six months to reach slightly below negative one
per cent
. However
, the price
rose in the second half of the year
ending at a little below two per cent
. Zinc
started at one
per cent
in January raised
a little to reach two per Verb problem
and rose
cent
in the next month then
it started to reduce slowly until June reached negative one
and continued the next four months with limited movement, Zinc
ended the last
quarter of the year
with a slight increase reached 2 per cent
as the highest one
of the three.Submitted by seifhasseb222 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, copper, zinc, year, one, cent with synonyms.
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