The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the average change in the
price
of Use synonyms
copper
, nickel and Use synonyms
zinc
for each month threw 2014.
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Overall
, we can see that the nickel was by far the highest percentage change at the beginning of the Linking Words
year
but ended as the lowest Use synonyms
one
of the three Use synonyms
at the end
of the Linking Words
year
. Use synonyms
While
, Linking Words
zinc
started the Use synonyms
year
with the lowest percentage change, Use synonyms
although
it ended at the highest point. Linking Words
Copper
prices had a limited range of variation.
In January the Use synonyms
price
of Use synonyms
nickle
was up six per Correct your spelling
nickel
cent
, but by the middle of the Use synonyms
year
in June it dropped to negative 3, Use synonyms
finally
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copper
ended the Use synonyms
year
with a Use synonyms
one
per Use synonyms
cent
rise. Use synonyms
Copper
started with a two per Use synonyms
cent
increase and the Use synonyms
price
started dropping for the next six months to reach slightly below negative Use synonyms
one
per Use synonyms
cent
. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
price
rose in the second half of the Use synonyms
year
ending at a little below two per Use synonyms
cent
. Use synonyms
Zinc
started at Use synonyms
one
per Use synonyms
cent
in January Use synonyms
raised
a little to reach two per Verb problem
and rose
cent
in the next month Use synonyms
then
it started to reduce slowly until June reached negative Linking Words
one
and continued the next four months with limited movement, Use synonyms
Zinc
ended the Use synonyms
last
quarter of the Linking Words
year
with a slight increase reached 2 per Use synonyms
cent
as the highest Use synonyms
one
of the three.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, copper, zinc, year, one, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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