The graph below shows the percentage change in the number of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.

The graph below shows the percentage change in the number of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
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The bar chart illustrates an alteration in the percentage of international students who graduated from universities in 8 Canadian regions during 2001 and 2006.
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, it can be seen that the number of graduates in 2006 was significantly more than in 2001 in all of the provinces.
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, New Brunswick had the highest number of overseas students in both years.
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the chart, New Brunswick with 7% in 2001, and 11% in 2006, held the first rank in graduation. The second rank in 2001, had allocated to Nova Scotia with 6%.
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, during that time the percentage of graduation increased dramatically in British Columbia from 4% to 11% and in 2006, the figure for
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province was the same as Nova Scotia. In both years, the number of graduates in Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador is similar. 4% in 2001, and 7% in 2006.
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, Ontario with less than 4% in the first year and 6% in the
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year is placed after them. The trend of change for Quebec and Alberta is similar too. The percentage of graduation in both of them has been rising by about 4%.
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