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The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph compares approximations of oil manufacturing
capacity
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 for a number of Gulf
countries
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 from 1990 to 2010 .
Overall
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, Oil
production
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 fluctuated throughout the years , but some
countries
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 like Saudi Arabia had the highest total
production
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 .
In contrast
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 , Qatar recorded the lowest
production
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capacity
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 not exceeding more than 2
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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 . It is clearly seen that Saudi Arabia dominated
production
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 from 1990 to 2010 starting with just over 8
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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 in 1990 ,
then
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 showing an upward inclination in the next five years to reach roughly 9
million
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barrels
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 . It increased significantly and reached slightly over 12
million
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 and continued to rise and reached the peak in 2010 with more than 14
million
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barrels
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 .
Whereas
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 , Qatae displayed the lowest
production
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capacity
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 in all years mentioned not surpassing 2
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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 . Uae
production
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 showed stability from 1995 to 2000 ,
then
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 rose moderately in 2005 to reach around 3
million
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barrels
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 and increased
further
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 to reach a peak in 2010 producing almost 4
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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 . Other
countries
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 like Iran , Kuwait and Iraq witnessed a moderate increase as well , but the
production
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 rate was roughly around 4
million
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. All
countries
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 produced the highest
capacity
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 in 2010 .
To conclude
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 , Saudi Arabia has the largest
capacity
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 for oil
production
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 ,
while
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 Qatar has the lowest .

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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Change the seventh paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words capacity, countries, production, million, barrels, day with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the seventh paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • estimated
  • oil production capacity
  • Gulf countries
  • period between 1990 and 2010
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • significant increase
  • decrease
  • relatively stable
  • overall trend
  • highest production capacity
  • lowest production capacity
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