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The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows the estimated
oil
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production
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capacity
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, measured in millions of
barrels
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 per
day
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, for six Gulf
countries
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 (Iran, Iraq, Kuwait,
Qatar
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, Saudi Arabia, and the UAE) from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
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, Saudi Arabia consistently had the highest
oil
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production
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capacity
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 across all years,
while
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Qatar
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's
capacity
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 remained the lowest. The other four
countries
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—Iran, Iraq, Kuwait, and the UAE—had relatively similar
production
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 capacities, all showing a steady increase over the period. Notably,
oil
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production
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capacity
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 grew for all
countries
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 except
Qatar
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, which remained constant throughout the period. In 1990, Saudi Arabia’s
oil
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production
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 was just over 8
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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, rising sharply to more than 14
million
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barrels
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 by 2010, making it the largest producer in the region.
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,
Qatar
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 maintained a stable
production
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 of just under 1
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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, the lowest among the
countries
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. For the remaining
countries
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, Iran, Iraq, Kuwait, and the UAE,
oil
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production
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capacity
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 ranged between 2 and 3
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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 in 1990. By 2010, all of these
countries
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 had increased their
capacity
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 to approximately 4
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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, showing gradual but steady growth in their
oil
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 output.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, production, capacity, barrels, day, countries, qatar, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • estimated
  • oil production capacity
  • Gulf countries
  • period between 1990 and 2010
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • significant increase
  • decrease
  • relatively stable
  • overall trend
  • highest production capacity
  • lowest production capacity
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