The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The cyclical process provides the steps that need to be taken in order to produce
ethanol
, a type of biofuel.
Overall
, the entire procedure contains two major steps, including
the
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generating
ethanol
and
the
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using
of
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this
biofuel to
operate
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turn
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it into an eco-friendly resource for transportation. The first stage begins with the
absorbing
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sunlight and carbon dioxide
of
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plants and trees. In the next step, a product of the pre-processing called cellulose is created
through
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by a machine. After
being done
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several chemical experiments, sugars are collected with the addition of microbes,
then
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finished
ethanol
is generated. Regarding the phase of the practical application,
ethanol
is used as a biodegradable resource for running the vehicles
such
as cars, trucks and
airplanes
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. To be more specific, these means of transport release to the environment
amount
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an amount
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of carbon dioxide which is recured to become the energy for the absorption of plants and trees.
As a result
, the cyclical process is
restared
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restarted
restored
.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • procurement
  • raw materials
  • milled
  • surface area
  • fermentable substance
  • enzymes
  • yeast
  • fermentation
  • byproducts
  • isolate
  • purified
  • distillation
  • concentration
  • containers
  • distribution
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