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Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what the problem is suggest solutions to the problem

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 with your pet you feel good safe even have fun with them . sixthly - learn when to say "NO" : it is really important to say no to someone when they cross the line because if you did not say no to them it will effect you in a nigtive way and it going to make you feel more
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It is important to address all parts of the task prompt, including introducing yourself, explaining the problem in detail, and suggesting specific solutions.
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Make sure to use a formal tone as this is a letter to the local council. Avoid conversational language and ensure your writing is polite and professional.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas into clear paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea or point.
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Ensure that your writing has a logical progression. Each point should naturally lead to the next, making your argument easy to follow.
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The letter includes several practical suggestions for stress relief, showing that the writer has thought about the problem and potential solutions.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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