The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three

metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,

and make comparisons where relevan
The line graph illustrates information about the average
price
changes
of three
kind
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of metals (Copper, Nickel, and Zinc) from January to December 2014.
Overall
, the
change
in value of Nickel and Copper decreased,
while
Zinc’s
price
changes
experienced
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growth throughout the given period.
Moreover
, the
price
gap between
three
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metals narrowed by the end of 2014. In terms of metal with the highest value
changes
in the first period, Nickel accounted for 6%. The
change
in
price
then
experienced a dramatic decrease to 1% in March before falling gradually and hitting the through at -3% in June. In the second half of 2014, it experienced a fluctuation followed by a moderate growth to 1% in Nov and remained at the same level until the end of the period.
On the other hand
, the
change
in the value of Copper made up 2% in Jan before dropping gradually to just below 0% in June. The figure
then
increased steadily
at
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just below 2% in December. The remaining metal, Zinc, had a 1%
price
change
in January. Zinc’s
price
changes
then
experienced
a
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significant growth and peaked at 3% in February, before falling gradually in June. The figure remained steady over five months, followed by a dramatic rise to 2% in December. By the end of 2014, Zinc had the highest level of
price
changes
compared to other metals.
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