The Table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The Table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The table shows the
distance
travelled using different forms of
transport
in England in two different years (1985 and 2000). Units are measured in
miles
travelled per
person
per year.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that travel by all modes of
transport
rose, with the exception of walking, bicycle, and local
bus
.
As a result
, the average
distance
travelled per
person
increased quite significantly, with
car
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being by far the most widely used means of
transport
in both years and
bicycle
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and
taxi
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the least. In 1985, a
person
travelled an average of 4,740
miles
per year, and most of these were by
car
, accounting for almost three-fourths of the total (3,199). The
miles
travelled by local
bus
and other was far smaller, making up roughly one-tenth each. The
distance
travelled by train and walking was even shorter at 289 and 255
miles
respectively. Meanwhile,
taxi
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,
bicycle
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, and long-
distance
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were the least common modes of
transport
and constituted a small fraction, ranging from 13 to 54
miles
. In 2000, the average
distance
travelled per
person
experienced a noticeable climb to 6,475, and
car
remained the most widely used form of
transport
at 4,806. In fact, the
distance
travelled by
this
particular mode of
transport
witnessed by far the greatest growth of around 1,700.
While
the
distance
travelled by other, taxi, train, and long-
distance
bus
went up slightly by around 50 – 100
miles
, the figure for long-
distance
bus
more or less halved. As for the rest, the figures remained relatively stable. Interestingly, when combined, the
distance
travelled by all modes of
transport
, apart from cars, amounted to only 1,600, which was far exceeded by that of
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alone.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words distance, transport, miles, person, bus, car with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • mode of travel
  • popularity
  • decline/increase
  • public transport
  • urbanization
  • infrastructure
  • economic factors
  • environmental impact
  • urban planning
  • technological advancements
  • data points
  • trend
  • usage
  • comparison
  • implications
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