The Table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The Table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The table shows the
distance
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travelled using different forms of
transport
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in England in two different years (1985 and 2000). Units are measured in
miles
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travelled per
person
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per year.
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, it can clearly be seen that travel by all modes of
transport
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rose, with the exception of walking, bicycle, and local
bus
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.
As a result
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, the average
distance
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travelled per
person
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increased quite significantly, with
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car
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cars
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being by far the most widely used means of
transport
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in both years and
bicycle
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bicycles
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and
taxi
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taxis
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the least. In 1985, a
person
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travelled an average of 4,740
miles
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per year, and most of these were by
car
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, accounting for almost three-fourths of the total (3,199). The
miles
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travelled by local
bus
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and other was far smaller, making up roughly one-tenth each. The
distance
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travelled by train and walking was even shorter at 289 and 255
miles
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respectively. Meanwhile,
taxi
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taxis
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,
bicycle
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bicycles
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, and long-
distance
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bus
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buses
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were the least common modes of
transport
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and constituted a small fraction, ranging from 13 to 54
miles
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. In 2000, the average
distance
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travelled per
person
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experienced a noticeable climb to 6,475, and
car
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remained the most widely used form of
transport
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at 4,806. In fact, the
distance
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travelled by
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particular mode of
transport
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witnessed by far the greatest growth of around 1,700.
While
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the
distance
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travelled by other, taxi, train, and long-
distance
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bus
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went up slightly by around 50 – 100
miles
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, the figure for long-
distance
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bus
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more or less halved. As for the rest, the figures remained relatively stable. Interestingly, when combined, the
distance
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travelled by all modes of
transport
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, apart from cars, amounted to only 1,600, which was far exceeded by that of
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car
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cars
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alone.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words distance, transport, miles, person, bus, car with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • mode of travel
  • popularity
  • decline/increase
  • public transport
  • urbanization
  • infrastructure
  • economic factors
  • environmental impact
  • urban planning
  • technological advancements
  • data points
  • trend
  • usage
  • comparison
  • implications
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