The chart beow shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The following bar chart illustrates how often American
people
had fast Use synonyms
food
in three years Use synonyms
of
2003, 2006 and 2013. The frequencies are divided into 6 categories, starting with "Daily" and ending with "Never". At first glance, it is evident that the everyday users of fast Change preposition
apply
food
were as rare as users who never had fast Use synonyms
food
Use synonyms
in
during these three years. Another interesting point is that generally, the lion's share of Change preposition
apply
people
allocated only once a week and once or twice a month to eat fast Use synonyms
food
in 2003, 2006 and 2013.
Looking at details, the percentage of citizens Use synonyms
consumed
junk Correct pronoun usage
who consumed
food
every day and never Use synonyms
were
5% and less than 5%. Unnecessary verb
apply
Moreover
, the proportion of Linking Words
people
eating several times a week Use synonyms
were
higher in 2006, compared to 2003 and 2013. Fast Change the verb form
was
food
fans who had it once a week were slightly higher in 2006 than in 2003 and 2013. Use synonyms
In addition
, only a quarter of Linking Words
people
ate fast Use synonyms
food
once or twice a month in 2006, as opposed to in 2003 and 2013 with 30% and more than 30%, respectively. Use synonyms
Finally
, 15% of Linking Words
people
ate fast Use synonyms
food
a few times a year in both 2006 and 2013, and less than 15% of them tend to Use synonyms
had
Change the verb
have
this
frequency Linking Words
for
their eating Change preposition
in
habit
.Fix the agreement mistake
habits
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