The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eating too much. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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illustrates
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essential meals among three types of nutrients, saturated fat, Change preposition
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sodium
and added sugars. All Correct your spelling
of
if
these nutrients Could lead to Correct your spelling
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harm
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, it is readily noticeable that Correct article usage
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number
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the number
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amounts
sodium
and saturated fat in
their dinner.
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consume
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breakfast
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, they are doubling it in their lunch then
tripling on their dinner. Add Correct word choice
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, the dinner represents a nearly third of all saturated fat. Correct pronoun usage
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Breakfast
usually being the least meal that contain
saturated fat by roughly 16%.
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contains
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of
breakfast
and snacks
that have saturated fat approximately
between 21-26%. Add a missing verb
is approximately
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breakfast
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, snacks, breakfast with synonyms.
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