80. The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

80. The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart discusses the quantities of power generated from many sources in a country between the years 1985 and 2003.
Overall
, some of the energy
that is
produced increased
however
other energy that has been constructed has declined. Oil was the most prominent fuel source in both years, but it decreased in the latter year by 13% from 52%. Quencidantally,
nuclear generated
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power
also
had a decline in between the two years from 22% to 17%. Hydrogen has not had a change in the period from 1985 and 2003 it has stayed at 4%. It can be said that the three remaining categories have risen. Starting coal has gained 5% which puts it at 13% after that natural gas has gone from nearly a tenth to just under a quarter having the biggest growth of all by 10%. The least to grow was renewable power with a messily 3%.
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