The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates specific data, which shows the
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people
participating in various activities at a social centre in Melbourne over the period from 2000 and 2020.
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, we can see that the Film Club had the highest Linking Words
number
of attendees throughout the entire period. Use synonyms
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the Musical Performance activity did not start in 2000 like the rest of the activities, it began in 2005 with the lowest Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
participants
over the next 10 years.
Table Tennis started in 2000 with Use synonyms
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and experienced little change over the next 10 years, with just below 20 Use synonyms
people
in 2010. Use synonyms
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number
of Use synonyms
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started to increase significantly, reaching 60 members by 2020. Martial Arts Use synonyms
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began with a small Linking Words
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, but after 2005, the attendance began to fall rapidly, reaching only 5 Use synonyms
people
by the end of 2020.
For Amateur Dramatics, we can see that no change had been to the Use synonyms
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of its attendees as it started with 35 Use synonyms
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in 2000, Use synonyms
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, it ended in 2020 with the same Linking Words
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