The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates specific data, which shows the
number
of people
participating in various activities at a social centre in Melbourne over the period from 2000 and 2020.
Overall
, we can see that the Film Club had the highest number
of attendees throughout the entire period. Although
the Musical Performance activity did not start in 2000 like the rest of the activities, it began in 2005 with the lowest number
of participants
over the next 10 years.
Table Tennis started in 2000 with small
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a small
the small
number
of participants
and experienced little change over the next 10 years, with just below 20 people
in 2010. However
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However,
number
of participants
started to increase significantly, reaching 60 members by 2020. Martial Arts also
began with a small number
of people
, but after 2005, the attendance began to fall rapidly, reaching only 5 people
by the end of 2020.
For Amateur Dramatics, we can see that no change had been to the number
of its attendees as it started with 35 people
in 2000, Although
, it ended in 2020 with the same number
of participants
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