Sugar consumption is too harmful. Some say it is government’s responsibility to limit sugar intake, while others say it’s individual who are responsible. Discuss both views and give you opinion?

The consumption of sugary foods and beverages has drastically increased in the

last

few decades.

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intake

, at least at

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level, is proven to be harmful to our health.

For

this

reason, some people believe that governments should ramp up their efforts to limit

sugar

intake

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people’s

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,

while

others believe that it is a personal choice of each individual. I strongly agree with

this

second position because each citizen should be free to make their choices. On the one hand, those who agree with the idea of considering

this

issue a government’s responsibility probably refer to the fact that, in welfare states, the

way

in which each of us lives his own life interferes with others. As an example of that, if

sugar

consumption is harshly harmful,

then

probably these people will need more medical care

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others and

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an impact on

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hospitals are able to give

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that many people the cure they need.

Furthermore

, it is a paternalistic

way

of seeing the form of action of the governments, where if citizens are not able to choose what is best for them, governments should assume the responsibility to show them the right

way

. Despite it might sound a logical

way

of thinking, I disagree with these ideas because I believe that freedom in people’s life choices is a supreme right. Indeed,

on the other hand

, those who consider individuals responsible for their life choices agree that, after making common knowledge that a certain

intake

of

sugar

is harmful, and it is science’s role, each of us should be free to behave in the opposite

way

.

Instead

of tackling

this

problem by limiting

sugar

intake

as an obey, different strategies can be used,

such

as promoting adverts that really show the effects of

sugar

in people’s diets and make everyone more aware of that.

To conclude

, the health

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need for sure to be considered to face

this

problem but, in my opinion, the right to choose is on

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higher level and

for

this

reason, it needs to be protected more than the other,

in particular

, because other solutions can be found to fight

this

issue.