The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
The charts
illustrates
the portion of both Change the verb form
illustrate
gender
in one Asian country who passed their driving Fix the agreement mistake
genders
test
between 1980 and 2010.
Overall
, both gender
witnessed different Fix the agreement mistake
genders
development
during Fix the agreement mistake
developments
these year
. Change the determiner
this year
these years
Women
experienced fluctuations on
passing the Change preposition
in
test
, whereas
men
consistently increased before witnessed
stagnation.
During Wrong verb form
witnessing
these year
, Change the determiner
this year
these years
women
who have received their driving lisence
are experienced Correct your spelling
licence
license
fluctuate
trends. There are Wrong verb form
fluctuating
much
more Fix the agreement mistake
many
women
who have
passed the Unnecessary verb
apply
test
during
1980 until 2000. Change preposition
from
Women
reached it
peak of quantity for around 79% Change the pronoun
its
at
Change preposition
in
first
year of Change the article
the first
twenty-one
century. Replace the word
the 21st
However
, there are slightly decreased
in them Replace the word
slight decrease
subsuquently
.
On the other side, steady and stagnation trends are witnessed in Correct your spelling
subsequently
men
. Men
experienced same
trend as Change the article
the same
women
for two decades but the differences are in the first decade. The addition of first decades are
even Change the verb form
is
more
higher despite their start points Change the word
apply
are
lower. Wrong verb form
being
However
men
stagnant on quantity of person
who passed the Fix the agreement mistake
people
test
in the next decades by around 49%.Submitted by auzarinawukirasih19 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words test, women, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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