The chart below gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar

chart

demonstrates that

what’s

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what

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proportion

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the proportion

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of

young

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the young

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generation which are between 25 and 34 are housed in the UK. The graph shows that young

persons

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people

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who own

home

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a home

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for themselves

is

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are

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decreasing slightly during

this

period.

On the other hand

, persons

whom

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who

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renting

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rent

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the

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a

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house is increasing steadily. The

chart

illustrates that the number of young

peoples

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people

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who have

home

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homes

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for themselves is decreasing moderately from just under 60 percent in 2004 to

approximate

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approximately

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36% in 2014.

Although

in

overall

chart

has

increasing

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an increasing

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manner

but

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apply

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it has a very small increase in 2007 and

reach

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reaches

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to

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apply

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almost 56% from just under 55% in 2006.

On the other hand

, the

chart

shows that the

young

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number of young

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humans that prefer to rent a house

is increase

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increased

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substantially from almost 20% in 2004 to just under 50% in 2014.

Also

, the

chart

demonstrates that in 2011 and 2012 rate of people in both categories

are

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was

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almost steady and without any change so

that

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apply

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they just

remain

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remained

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at almost 42% for

whom

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those who

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are renters and almost 44%

for

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apply

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whom are owners. After these years the number of people who are owners

is

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has

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increased consistently.

To sum up

,

therefore

, it is easily apparent from

this

chart

that these days rental markets

is

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are

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more active than past and

young

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the young

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generations

are prefer

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prefer

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to rent a house

instead

of buy it.