The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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The two maps

depicts

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the information about the

different

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difference

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between today's Lynwich

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college

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College

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site and the one in 2006.

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, It can be seen that there are many

buliding

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building

buildings

and

path

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paths

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have

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that have

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been

contructed

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constructed

between 2006 and today, including

connected

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a connected

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path

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paths

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to the road, sports centre, bike storage and cafeteria. Notably, the library has been moved to the

coner

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corner

of the

college

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Nowdays

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, Lynwich

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college

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College

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has renovated many

part

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college

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the college

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, starting from

relocated

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the library to be in the middle of

college

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buliding

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building

1 and

buliding

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building

2. Meanwhile, the former library location has been replaced by

new

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sports centre.

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, the car park has been renovated to share part of

there

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space with new bike storage. To facilitate student transportation, The bus stop for the students

has been

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built

bulit

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built

during

this

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period

as well as

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the paths to visit

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the carpark

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carpark

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and

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bus stop

busstop

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bus stop

while

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having the new cafeteria at the

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junction

juction

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junction

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ever

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path.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words college with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
30
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

154 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

underwent significant changes
consisted of
large open space
utilized
relocated
limited facilities and amenities
wider range of facilities and amenities

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